Wednesday, February 10, 2010

Joy

The mailman had just left i frantacly raced out the door and grabbed the mail as i looked through carefully packaged mail i noticed the package i had been waiting for since a month ago. It was the pellet gun 2000 it shot out blue, green, gray, purple, yellow, and orange pellets . It was like unwrapping a pile of hundred dollar bills it gave such an exuberant joy that it felt like i was slowly flying throught the air. I ran to my room unwrapped my pellet packages loaded the gun flew outside and set up my target. My breath was billowing in front of my face as my trigger finger twitched i steadied my aim at my target imagining that this was an imaginary enemy as i pulled the trigger and felt the kickback of the gun it felt like the greatest high you could acheive. The can clanged with the impact of the pellet i ran up and checked the can the bullet hit right were i wanted it to. The exubarent joy that flooded my body was unmimaginable i thought this must be true joy.

1 comment:

  1. I like the way you worded "The exubarent joy that flooded my body was unmimaginable i thought this must be true joy." and you used grate deatale for the rest of it.

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