Tuesday, February 2, 2010

My House

After i get off the bus i begin the short walk home i can hear the birds singing.As i enter my house i smell that familiar aroma i feel secure because this is my area this is my domain as i enter i feel a sense of secuirity i see our living room and as i countinue in my house. I run to my room start up my gaming system and feel the rush of the game and see the flashing images that capitivates me into playing. As i go to supper i smell the delicous armoas which enter my mind i start trying to break the code of whats for supper. When i taste the food my taste buds scream with joy as i drink my juice the flavour alights my mouth with a fury of flavors which make me take the next sip. As my mind slowly falls asleep the last things i feel is my cozy bed my fan gently blowing and a perfect sense of security.

2 comments:

  1. pretty good. Could add more time on it. Good job!

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  2. when u say "as i drink my juice the flavour alights my mouth" id change alights to ignights! but good story

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