I sat up gasping for breath the sword stuck out from my chest letting warm blood pump around my chest makeing a pool of scarlet seeping into the ground the last thought i had was is this how it ends. I woke up blinking in the light satring at a tent made of wool. I wondered what happened all i remember is scarlet blood and a sharp pain but then i thought i shoulfd have died. I saw the tent open and a Gigon ente rthe room "ahh your awake good to see"
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Need it to be longer....
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it soundsgood but maybe makeit a little longer other then that its a goodidea.
ReplyDeleteIt needs to be longer but it doesn't really make a whole lot of sense
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